~As she marvelled at his decorous works of art,
He drank in the sight of her pitch dark hair,
that fell behind her back in a sheaf.
The shade-giving trees could only bend to,
the melodies of the autumn leaves as they,
rose with the breeze to witness the eclectic adoration~
Published by ~Yours truly
Nomison is a christian teacher from Kenya with a passion for kids and people alike. He is a writing enthusiast who draws inspiration not only from the word of God but also other renowned writers. He is here to stay, learn, write & have a good time. What shall they remember you for? I will write mine!
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Beautiful and flowing. Lovely!!!
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You are quite gifted at giving an accurate response..as such, I would rather refer to you as gifted100.
Thanks.
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Lol, thanks
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Beautiful words.
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Am grateful for the recognition
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Great
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Thanks ankush..peace and love
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Brilliant 👍👍
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Thanks Dulcy-sorry for the late reply. Your sweet comment was found trapped in my spam.
God bless you for the love and support.
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I really like the original kind of punctuation, not to mention the beautiful scene and the last two words combined!! Beautiful, Nomison 🤩
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Wow! I actually don’t know what to say-thankyou Lia.
I actually have learnt a lot from your poetry.
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Nomison… what a heartwarming comment, thank you so much… truly. This one is a style all your own though… love it. ❤️ Thanks again. :)))
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful poetry, very emotionally gripping and perfect visuals to support 🌺✨
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Wow! The response is bare magic!
Thanks for the support Gandhi; I enjoy your blog as well.
Peace & love.
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You’re most welcome 🌸
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